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Yay Bianca they look really good. I love the way you wrote out with the RSVP date February First but I am so paranoid that people will miss that and just think anytime in February. Then again- maybe Im not giving them the benefit of the doubt. Either way they look great!

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They look great!

I found 2 typos:

travel details insert- the rate requireS

our website insert- help in ANY WAY
Thank you! My sister is the one who proofreads for me... I haven't gotten this copy to her yet. This is a revision of what I first came up with.
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Love it, and it is DIY??
I did make them up after browsing around for ideas.
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Yay Bianca they look really good. I love the way you wrote out with the RSVP date February First but I am so paranoid that people will miss that and just think anytime in February. Then again- maybe Im not giving them the benefit of the doubt. Either way they look great!
Thanks! I wasn't planning on doing a real RSVP card, but I just added it anyways. I don't have very high expectations either.
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THose look amazing! The only small thing I would suggest is that you use the word "detail" twice in the same sentence.. "our website has more detailed information about every detail of our destination wedding.." I might change it to read

 

"our website has more detailed information about every aspect of our destination wedding.."

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