STD rhyme feedback

love the poem idea. We did one to and everyone loved it.

Thanks so much for the ideas ladies....i like what each of you did and will take all the ideas back to the drawing board and I think we'll switch it up a bit in places then I'll post again with what we're going with!

very nice!!

The time has finally come,

I said yes and we’ll become one.

It won’t be June or in July,

But January, we will fly

You won’t need boots or a hat,

But, it will be hot, I promise you that.

Go ahead and take a guess…

It’s Jamaica mon… with no stress

January is the date to wait,

So don’t forget to save the date.

Add your name and the official dates

Here is an idea.. I hope it helps... : )

Thanks for starting this going. I actually and going to steal this idea if you don't mind- LOVE LOVE LOVE IT

Hi Ladies, I figure I'll post with what we ended up going with...if a part of it is from you thank you sooo much! Also a big thanks to everyone else too though!

He proposed she said yes!

Where we're getting married though you'll never guess.

It wont be in summer but the cold month of January.

Don't be alarmed outside wont be snowy & scary.

It's gonne be really hot we can promise you that.

You won't need a parka, boots or a hat.

Do you think you know? Do you have a clue?

We're going to Jamaica mon! We hope you can too!

We're getting married January 11, so you've got a bit of a wait!

We're going to have an amazing time so be sure to save the date!

Looking back I guess I never even changed it up too much LOL....but where I did I think it sounds way better.

And of course MissLightingBug you can steal my ideas...I'm sure I've borrwed enough from other people on this site that it's my turn to give back! lol

So cute!!!

Love the poem! We did a really simple, kinda cheesy one....

He asked the question

The answer was yes,

insert name here is going to wear

a wedding dress.

We're off to the beach

to get it done,

come to Mexico

and join in the fun.

Definitely cheesy, but great for our homemade save the dates