Teacher in need of editors

LadyP · October 15, 2007

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Originally Posted by Tlseege

Maria... you rule. Seriously. I'm not sure why I EVER send out anything without asking you to read it first!

I Know and now that she has made it so beautiful i need to add a paragraph about the cost of the trip so that they can make a educated decision instead of an emotional one

LadyP · October 15, 2007

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Originally Posted by MikkiStreak

Catherine,
Here's my edit....

Dear Family and Friends;

Weâ€™re getting married! We have chosen flip-flops over high heels for our destination wedding in St. Thomas. This area of the US Virgin Islands promises to be lots of fun in the sun, with its beautiful beaches, fun activities, and tons of R & R.

We would love to have you attend our intimate affair while enjoying the beauty of the Virgin Islands. We have chosen October 18, 2008, so please save the date!

Weâ€™ve been told St. Thomas weather is ideal in October. Our sunset wedding will be held on the beach at Magenâ€™s Bay on Saturday, October 18, 2008 at 5:00pm. Travel arrangements are being handled by for guest accommodations at .

We realize it may be difficult to attend our October 2008 wedding, and we understand if you are unable to join us. Weâ€™re crossing our fingers with hopes that you can join us for as long as you choose to stay. There are so many things to see and do in St. Thomas, regardless of the length of your stay.

The law could change at any time after December 31, but passports are not currently required for travel to the US Virgin Islands. If you plan to obtain a passport for your travel, please allow yourself (insert timeframe) to receive it. You can go to your local post office with a certified copy of your birth certificate, photo ID, and passport photos (which can be taken at you local CVS. Walgreen, or Picture People). The application is available for download online at Passport Home.

Formal invitations will be sent closer to our wedding date. At this time, our wedding coordinator is requesting a tentative guest count to help us in planning events and activities for our wedding weekend. Please return the tentative RSVP by January 31. We look forward to planning our private destination wedding and spending time with all of our loved ones.

Love,
Lawrence and Catherine

WHERE CAN I ADD THAT IT WILL COST APPROXIAMATELY 700-1000 3-5 IN ST THOMAS.