DIY AHR invitation advice

[sharlie]

 

 

 

 

 

I started creating our invitation for AHR reception..I plan on printing with vista print with mat finish with postcards for RSVP.  I started designing it but I would like some advice what to add, delete, edit... be honest please! it is pretty rough now...thanks so much

[sunshine2413]

Maybe you can change the font for the top, "Sharlie and Daniel will be married...." part, so it stands out. Then the party annoucement and invite all together in a separate font from you marriage annoucement; that way your marriage annoucement will stand out. Otherwise looks like its good to go to the printer to me! Good luck with your wedding and AHR!!!

[becks]

It looks really great!

 

I agree that the introduction of a second (script) font to highlight certain elements could give it a bit of a pop.

 

Also, if it were me, I'd move the second paragraph up a bit (you can add space between the other paragraphs), move the "to" that's on it's own to the line above or below, and adjust the wording so it doesn't read "honor and celebrate... celebration"

 

You might also want to add your wedding date - lots of people like to know that information.

 

Fabulous work!

[sharlie]

thank you so much for the great feedback.. I really appreciate it! I am going to work on it tonight =). I love the suggestions. I wanted to put the wedding date but I fear the guest will not read carefully and think that is the reception date.=(