Wording advice on STD

[merrylee]

Hi All,

 

I am working on designing my save the dates, and I am not too fond of the the traditional wording so I made up my own and I was hoping to get your feed back.

 

It is a BP invitation so the date and everything is on the side

 

 

The Sun Will Be Shining; and the Waves Will Be Crashingas

 Meredith & Tom

become Husband and Wife and begin their new life

 

So Save The Date for a Wedding Celebration; in beautiful

Cancun Mexico the PerfectWedding Destination

 

Formal invitation to follow

 

[sharlie]

sounds really cute just add "will" before "become" very creative

[merrylee]

thanks so much Sharlie, i needed someone else to read it besides FI and I