Need Help Picking Invitation Wording!

[Brandy]

Since all of you ladies have such fantastic opinions and are honest...I need help picking the wording for our boarding pass invitations...I cant seem to pick one that I like, let me know what you think.

Option One:

Walking on the beach together

Hand in hand we'll be forever

Bride

&

Groom

Invite you to share in the joy

when they exchange marriage vows

and begin their new life together.

 

Option Two:

Walking on the beach together

Hand in hand we'll be forever

Bride

&

Groom

Invite you to share the sun,

the sea and the sand

as they become husband and wife.

 

Option Three:

As unique as a seashell

as deep as the sea

As eternal as the waves

our love is meant to be

It is with joy that we,

Bride

&

Groom

invite you to share

in our happiness

[*Karla*]

Are you actually going to say "bride and groom," or are you going to use your names?

 

Also, is the DW put on by you or your parents? If it's your parents, I think it's okay to say "they," but if the invites are coming from you, I would say "join us as we."

 

I like the first one, if you used actual names, and use "we" and "our" instead of "they" and "their." Does that make sense?

[Brandy]

Yes Im putting our names in there, and yes that was another option I was considering "togther with their parents" I just didnt want to list too many options lol

[soontobemrsdow]

I like the third one best

[*Karla*]

Well, I hope you get some more opinions, 'cause right now it's tied up, LOL!

[miss_delerium]

I like #2 the best, but I agree with Karla about the "we" and "our" instead of "they". Otherwise it reads kinda funny.