Wording/spelling/grammar check please!!! :)

[shanng243]

Is this right? I'm not really sure about the punctuation and capitalization. Also, is the wording ok? If not, any suggestions to improve anything would be awesome!!! Also thinking of putting "Love makes life a paradise..." across the top of the invite. not sure though. Thanks!!!!!

 

 

Shannon ........

and

Jason......

 

Are pleased to announce they will be

married in a private seaside ceremony

Thursday, the twelfth of August 2010

in Cabo San Lucas, Mexico.

 

Together with their families,

they invite you to join them for a

wedding celebration when they return

as husband and wife.

 

Saturday, October 2, 2010

Seven o'clock in the evening

The Skyroom

[mexico102]

sound great, looks good!

Ps 10/2/10 is my wedding in Mexico

[AishaB]

It looks perfect to me. I also have to say that I love the wording and just might "borrow" it for the AHR that I am maybe also planning! Great job.

[JanineA]

I think it looks and sounds great! Though perhaps you may want to put venue, then date then time (The Skyroom, Saturday October 2, 2010, then time). Or you can leave as is.

[jodieP]

Looks great, love your wording!

 

Jodie.xx