Boarding Pass STD wording

[surprise4us]

Hi Girls

 

Well I ahve looked through all sorts of threads for this but I am having a hard time reading some of them.

I am trying to put together the wording for my boarding pass STD, which is slowly turning into my invitation as my date creeps closer and I still don' t have them out.

My question is, as i send these out i need people to put down their deposits, how do I stress the time limit for them to do this on the invite? How did you word this? Also how do I tell them to book with our agent to get this price?

thanks any other advice or wording you used would be grearly appreciated.

 

Thanks

[Kate_CPWInvites]

You can just come right out and say it so they get the idea. Usually it is something like this ...

 

We have arranged a special rate for all of our guests through (travel business name). Deposits must be received by (date) and can be made by calling (travel agent name) at (phone number/email).

[Teira1031]

I agree with Kate_CPWInvites , straight forward but in a polite way !

[Islandgirl910]

I like this. Think I may use it for ours.

Originally Posted by Kate_CPWInvites 

You can just come right out and say it so they get the idea. Usually it is something like this ...

We have arranged a special rate for all of our guests through (travel business name). Deposits must be received by (date) and can be made by calling (travel agent name) at (phone number/email).