My monogram - work in progress - suggestions needed!

[Jo 2010]

TA DA!!!

 

My gorgeous talented friend has sent me the first draft of my monogram...

 

I love love lova all the elements,but I think it could use some layout and placement work??

 

Just looking for any suggestions...

 

I just can't put my finger on it

 

Thanks in advance for your help ladies - can't wait to hear your suggestions !!!!

 

[TheFutureMrs.Sears]

It looks great!

 

OMG a Fiji wedding how exciting!! Oh and I love your poem!

[vlynnw]

that looks really great she did an amazing job, the only thing I notice is that the writing where your date is is somewhat difficult to see

[super19]

I agree, the writing is somewhat difficult to read. Beautiful first draft!

[TheFutureMrs.Sears]

I would also agree that the writing is difficult to read. I just got so caught up in the fact that you are getting married in Fiji that I forgot to comment about the writing. lol

[~Melissa~]

very nice! well done!! only thing i would change is the size and font of the date text

[autjo]

Great colors and first draft. You might consider playing up the 20-10-2010 date.

[merocket59]

Wow that looks great, I agree with the others the only alteration that may make it look even better is playing around with the date it is a little hard to read and doesn't make the cool date jump out. Can't wait to see the final!

[*Meagan*]

Very nice job! I agree with everyone else on writing and the font. Fiji so EXCITING!!!!

 

Also this may seem strange but is their a face in the flower on the right hand side of the flower? Its like the first thing I saw! Looks like a eye, nose, and mouth.. perfectly!

[hat0112]

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Originally Posted by future_mrs2010 Very nice job! I agree with everyone else on writing and the font. Fiji so EXCITING!!!! Also this may seem strange but is their a face in the flower on the right hand side of the flower? Its like the first thing I saw! Looks like a eye, nose, and mouth.. perfectly!

I agree! I love the monogram but I first saw a face in the flower.

And I would change the text for the date. It is hard to read.