Reminder to book trip

[~*Lisa*~]

Well as my RSVP date is coming up tomorrow and we've only received about 1/2 of our RSVP's, I thought it would be a good idea to email a little something to remind those who have told us they were coming, but haven't booked yet. This is what I came up with.

 

This is just a quick reminder that if you haven’t done so already, now is the time to book your wonderful dream vacation to Jamaica! Of course, while there, as a bonus, you’ll get to witness a beautiful exchange of wedding vows between Ken and I. There are still 2 rooms left guaranteed at a great price! Call Jackie now as offer ends soon. (June 30th, 2009). Hope to see you all in Jamaica!

 

What do you gals think?

[Amarillis]

I think that is fine... some people need a little push... in the three last days for booking for our DW, 14 people booked. 84 booked in total.

[Geralyn]

Some people need a push...I think that is great

[~*Lisa*~]

Holy crap Amy, that's nuts! hopefully the same thing will happen to us!

[KLaBate54]

I really like you're idea! I may have to use it on my slow booking guests too!

[Ginalyn]

Great reminder! It gets people excited!

[~*Lisa*~]

Thanks so much! I'll be sending it out in the next few minutes! Let's see how many responses I get after that! lol

[Gr8ful]

I'll bet those last two rooms are now gone! I think a gentle reminder is always helpful -- there are always those last-minute procrastinators. I like how you worded this email -- it's lighthearted and fun and also gets the point across. I think we will end up doing something similar!

[~*Lisa*~]

I'll let you know how it turned out!

 

I also added at the end our TA's info and...First come, first at a great price!

[Shinbinea]

I think its great - good luck!