Please Proof My Timeline

[RAENJAY]

I've been working for 2 days now on getting this timeline right.... Can somebody proof it for me? Spelling, spacing, straight, etc??

 

All help appreciated.

 

And of course, if you need a timeline you are more than welcome to borrow my idea (which I got from Sarah)...

[Sarah]

Looks great Stephanie! I just have a couple comments:

 

1. Do you want everything capitalized or not? I'd make all the "to the" "at the" etc not capitalized, and all the other words capitalized- does that make sense? For instance, I'd do "Guests Arrive at the Beach" and "Mingle at the Cocktail Hour" and "Say Goodnight to the Newlyweds", and so on...

 

2. Do you want the date on there? I'd maybe put it right under your names.

 

Great job!

[Rachelle E.]

I think it's cute and informative! I like it!!

[RAENJAY]

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Originally Posted by AQHARIDER Looks great Stephanie! I just have a couple comments: 1. Do you want everything capitalized or not? I'd make all the "to the" "at the" etc not capitalized, and all the other words capitalized- does that make sense? For instance, I'd do "Guests Arrive at the Beach" and "Mingle at the Cocktail Hour" and "Say Goodnight to the Newlyweds", and so on... 2. Do you want the date on there? I'd maybe put it right under your names. Great job!

Thanks! That's why I needed somebody else to look at it. My eyes were going crossed.

[Sarah]

No problem! But, even if you don't change those things I still think it looks great- I like your clip art better than mine too!

[NHPT]

looks good to me- good job!

[Martha]

It looks good! However, the "C" in cocktail is not capitalized...I think it should be.

[amyh]

Thats really cute... everyone caught the only mistakes I noticed (capitals).

[LadyP]

NICE WORK now breathe

[SusanK]

Very cute! I'm definitely filing that in my computer's "wedding" folder... for later use