STD Rhyme, thoughts?

[Mishi]

I love stuff like this and that's such a cute idea... here's something I came up with...

 

This October, with our special guests, we will tie the Knot

This time of year the weather will be great and not so hot

 

Because you're dear to us, we would love for you to go

But understand if other plans simply cause a no

 

We are sure to have a blast, down in the Florida sun

We hope you'll share our special day and join in the fun

 

Just let us know, if you think, that you will make it there

These memories are sure to be exciting ones to share

 

For those of you that can't attend, after Michigan temperature rises

There will be a party back home and everyone's invited!

[BachataBride]

Great job Mishi!! I like it!!

[kennynicole]

Ohhh......Mishi that is really good!

[car1969]

What a great idea!!!

[SgtPepperette]

Ok ladies, I think we have a winner. Let me know what you think

 

Coming soon we are going to tie the knot.

It will be in October when it's not so hot.

 

We just wanted to let you know.

About this place we would like you to go.

 

Please come and join us in the Florida sun.

For that is where the wedding shall be done

 

Of course we would love for you to go

But understand if other plans simply cause a no

 

Just let us know if you will make it there.

These memories are sure to be exciting ones to share.

 

For those of you that will greatly be missed.

There will be a party at home that you just can't resist.

[KLC77]

Quote:

Originally Posted by SgtPepperette Ok ladies, I think we have a winner. Let me know what you think Coming soon we are going to tie the knot. It will be in October when it's not so hot. We just wanted to let you know. About this place we would like you to go. Please come and join us in the Florida sun. For that is where the wedding shall be done Of course we would love for you to go But understand if other plans simply cause a no Just let us know if you will make it there. These memories are sure to be exciting ones to share. For those of you that will greatly be missed. There will be a party at home that you just can't resist.

I think this turned out really well. I especially like the last verse.