1st Draft of My Invites...

[Mrs D To Be!]

they look great - you've got plenty of info in them which i'm sure your wedding guests will be thankful of.

[DLyteful]

Oh, its super cute and totally fun. I love the colors.

[Danniellou]

Great colors!!!

[ikupoo]

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Originally Posted by Bianca Here is the first version... This is going to go in a green pocketfolder. I am open to any and all suggestions!!! Please let me know what you think and speak your mind! (They really arent all weird sized, but thats what photobucket did...) Main Panel Inserts

Ok, here it goes.

The tropical colors are fun and casual. I think the main problem that I see is on Typography. Also, becareful of reversed out white type, as it tends to lose fine details. If you're gong through professional printer, ask for proofs
1.I personally don't like to use formal script typeface with very casual color conbination, but that's just me.
2. Fix spacing between F and R, R and Christopher on main panel. Center them on the page
3. Increase tracking between words on insert page headlines
4. Use upper and lower case on writing instead of all caps
5. In events timeline, I would use em dash instead of ":"
6. Watch out for widows. Bring "we" on the second paragraph over to the next line, adjust so that the word "transfers" isn't left out by itself

There are more, but I think I said enough. Graphic design is not easy, especially Typography!!

[KEE LAC]

I love them. I think that they are great

[nicmicj]

They look great! You did a really good job and the colors are very pretty!

[FutureBotter]

Great Job, Bianca!! You have such an eye for clean lines and simplicity with elegance! I'll have to keep these as an example to help with my invites, as I did with your boarding passes while creating mine! Awesome work!

[MAK]

I love the colors and how the theme is cohesive throughout the all the inserts!

 

Great Job,

 

MK

[Mel&B]

I really like your RSVP verbiage. I think I am going to "borrow" a few lines! Thanks for posting your invites. They look great!

[AnneW]

I really like the colors & how festive they are! Great job!