Help me choose...

[~Melissa~]

I vote for the first one. After I read it I was like "awe that's so sweet" the second one didn't really move me. But it was still nice

[MrsV-to-be]

I liked the wording of the first one the best, but as it stands right now, I would choose the second one, because in the first, you make a fantastic comment about continuing friendships and how friends are who you have chosen to be your family. That part is beautiful...the only that makes me hesitate is that you don't make a special comment about family. Do you think anyone may wonder if you are making a statement by your silence?

 

Other then that - I think both are wonderfully worded

[TammyB]

Hmmm good point Jennette. Course the only "family" that will be there is Cain's Ma and aunt, everyone else that is going are friends.

[MrsV-to-be]

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Originally Posted by TAMMYM Hmmm good point Jennette. Course the only "family" that will be there is Cain's Ma and aunt, everyone else that is going are friends.

if thats the case, then the wording is perfect and suits the occassion!
I definitly vote for No. 1

[pipi619]

Both of them are really nice, but I would pick the second one....

[bride2be]

I have to say - I like the second one too! It seemed flow better.

[bride2be]

I just had another thought - you could combine the two??

[soulmates]

I'm a little late, but I like the second one the best.

 

Kerri

[Lizzy]

I like the 2nd one too. It sounded more sincere to me.

 

Lizzy