Which wording for invites do you like???

[LEIGH]

I have been researching various wording for our invites.... I really like to be different with wording, but i want it to "sound like us"! Don't think any of you know, but this is my second wedding and I also have 2 little girls (7 and 11)! So, I'm trying to add them into the invite as well. (they are very excited about the wedding) The function is very casual, and we are pretty whimsical and not formal.....

Let me know what you think!!

Thanks girls!!

 

Leigh and Bryan are tying the knot!

Along with Sydney and Skylar,

Please join us for a wedding at sunset

to become one!

Oct. 7th

Dreams Cancun , Mexico

 

or....

 

Some people touch us for a moment..

and some for a season

....and some for a lifetime

In each other, we have found the one

with whom we will spend the rest of our lives

loving, honoring, and cherishing

Please join us in celebrating

as we tie the knot on

October 7, 2007 at sunset

Dreams Cancun, Mexico

Bryan, Leigh, Sydney and Skylar

[anaderoux]

I love the 2nd.. I'd just remove the 'and' in the second line.. but sounds really nice

[Nrvsbride]

I agree with Anny I like the second one. I would also reccomend removing the "and" from the second line. It sounds really pretty and I like that it is signed by the both of you and your daughters.

 

-Glenda

[*JillD*]

I like them both, sorry! I think #2 sounds more formal if that's what you are going for, #1 more fun.

 

I know I'm no help at all, see I'm even indecisive with other peoples weddings.

[deleted]

I like #1 better, but I would take out the line "to become one" -- I dunno I guess I just like short and sweet, and it has your names at the top.

[A10CalGal]

I like #1 based on how you prefaced your post.

[JulieG]

I also like number 1 the best.

[Christine]

hmm I don't know, I like #2.