Lost for words, please help...

[TammyB]

OK I over analyze everything.. :-) So if I do "We" instead of Cain and I, would that be too many "we" because the next sentence starts with "We" as well.

[Christine]

Tammy I think that if you put Tamm and Cain or we it sounds better because even though most people know the bride plans the wedding it would be bad if it was you who wrote the entire thing...does that even make sense?

[mexico15]

I like it too...I am going to steal the middle portion about family and friends joining as one! I like how that sounds! Great job! You made my job a little simpler! hehe!

[LCBride2007]

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Originally Posted by TAMMYM OK I over analyze everything.. :-) So if I do "We" instead of Cain and I, would that be too many "we" because the next sentence starts with "We" as well.

I do too. But I don't think it sounds bad w/the 2 "we" sentences, but you could switch it up like "Both of us ... ," or "The two of us" or something like that.

[TammyB]

Oh even better Ann, thanks..

[TammyWright]

we put this on our website after the wedding:

 

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Thank you soo much to everyone who made our wedding so special!   It couldn't have been more perfect and it meant soo much to us that our friends and family travelled from all over the globe to celebrate this special time with us.

[weez]

I think it sounds great Tammy, the couple of word tweaks that Ann suggested will be perfect. It couldn't come at a better time too, I am wrestling with my welcome letter as we speak so am going to steal some of your thank you lines too! Thanks!

[amyh]

I agree with Ann. Change "Cain and I" to "We". Otherwise it sounds great!