DW Invite Wording?

[kate.com]

Anyone willing to give me an example of what your invitation wording looks like?

[~*petals*~]

I'm actually working on mine right now... lemme know if you've got any suggestions....

 

Together with their families

 

My Name

and

My Future Husband's Name

 

invite you to share in the joy

when they exchange marriage vows

on Sunday, the twenty-fourth of May

Two thousand and nine

At time in the afternoon

 

On the cliffs overlooking the sea

Resort

Location

 

Reception immediately following the ceremony

[KLC77]

Mine reads...

 

Together with their parents,

Kelly Lynn ...

And

Ronald Scott ...

invite you to share in their joy

as they exchange marriage vows

at four o'clock in the afternoon

on Saturday, the tenth of January

two thousand and nine

Paradisus Riviera Cancun Resort

Riviera Maya, Mexico

Reception to follow ceremony

 

I like it... our families are complicated so we didn't want to put specific parent names, but sitll wanted them included