Help from any French speakers... I know you're out there...

[JaimeLynne]

I am wrapping up the semester of French 1441 (beginner's French). For part of our final exam we have to write 2 paragraphs about a trip we recently took. It is supposed to be in "passé composé". Also we were encouraged to use transitional words (d'abord, ensuite...) as well as vocabulary from this chapter (mainly weather related).

 

Please keep in mind this is a beginners class so it shouldn't look perfect but I would greatly appreciate if you would let me know of any obvious errors or if something "just doesn't look right". TIA!

 

Here's my short little essay (no laughing! LOL):

 

Le decembre dernière mon fiancé et moi sommes allés à Puerto Vallarta, Mexico. Il a fait trés beau. Il a du soleil et le ciel été blue. Mais, il fait trés chaud et loud avec temperatures entre 80 et 90 degrés. La ville été super! Il a des montagnes y la plage.

 

D’abord avons mangé à un restaurant très magnifique – Le Kliff! Ensuit sommes restés à la plague tout l’après midi. Après avons dormis. Puis avons fait de la voile et sommes allés a “Las Caletas” – une île trés magnifique! Malheureusement, en fin sommes retournés à Dallas.

[JaimeLynne]

Thanks Royfa for the help - Mods, feel free to close this thread now if you'd like

[Pisces]

I'm a French teacher and would be happy to help you if you ever need it. It sounds like you got some assistance with this already, but let me know if you would like more help:)